Моё "творчество"

Поделиться312010-02-12 19:39:39

Автор: Мелания
child of night
Откуда: Новополоцк
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Уважение: +25
Позитив: +15
Пол: Женский
Возраст: 32 [1992-01-11]
ICQ: 624033096
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2012-11-28 14:51:25

Танько написал(а):

у меня в школе руского языка уже год нету

ЭТО И ВИДНО))))))))

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Поделиться322010-02-12 22:01:32

Автор: Demonera
Stuck between two worlds
Откуда: Дамаск
Зарегистрирован: 2009-10-02
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Сообщений: 672
Уважение: +15
Позитив: +5
Пол: Женский
Возраст: 30 [1994-08-02]
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2011-11-11 12:22:32

Танько написал(а):

Это так стих називаеться умники если не понятно кумарите мля

Названия пишутся с большой буквы.

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Поделиться332010-02-16 21:42:25

Автор: Demonera
Stuck between two worlds
Откуда: Дамаск
Зарегистрирован: 2009-10-02
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Сообщений: 672
Уважение: +15
Позитив: +5
Пол: Женский
Возраст: 30 [1994-08-02]
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My Misery
Sitting in the darkness
Waiting for happiness to bloom.
Do I remember my childhood?
No, ‘cause my life is a total doom.
Sitting in the darkness
Waiting for the liberating light ray
Should I stay like this forever?
All I can do now is pray.
_____________________
Bridge:
Why have I chosen this tunnel with light in the end?
I’m chained, I’m lost, all the world thinks that I’m free but I just pretend.
_____________________
Chorus:
I want to escape.
I want to breathe.
I won’t to live my life.
______________________
Sitting in this darkness
I feel that I’m a doll.
Am I so hollow?
I don’t know anymore.
Sitting in this darkness
Wanting to escape.
Can I have my freedom back?
No and I’m the one to blame.
_____________________
Bridge:
Why have I chosen this tunnel with light in the end?
I’m chained, I’m lost, all the world thinks that I’m free but I just pretend.
_____________________
Chorus:
I want to escape.
I want to breathe.
I won’t to live my life.
______________________
One day I will break the chains of my sorrow.
One day I will breathe.
One day I won’t be so hollow.
One day I will be free.
_____________________
Bridge:
Why have I chosen this tunnel with light in the end?
I’m chained, I’m lost, all the world thinks that I’m free but I just pretend.
_____________________
Chorus:
I want to escape.
I want to breathe.
I won’t to live my life.
______________________

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Поделиться342010-02-18 16:04:54

Автор: Demonera
Stuck between two worlds
Откуда: Дамаск
Зарегистрирован: 2009-10-02
Приглашений: 0
Сообщений: 672
Уважение: +15
Позитив: +5
Пол: Женский
Возраст: 30 [1994-08-02]
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Forever

Standing here in the middle of the night
The craziest night of our life
I feel the poison in my heart and we can’t deny
That if one of us will live this world the other will die.
_____________________
Chorus:
When we are together I’m in Eden
When we are together it’s like heaven
We’ll be together for forever
We’ll be together even in inferno.
_____________________
I lived in hell until I met you
I can’t believe that I am with you.
You came and turned back to me my soul
I lived in sorrow’s endless hall.
_____________________
Chorus:
When we are together I’m in Eden
When we are together it’s like heaven
We’ll be together for forever
We’ll be together even in inferno.

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Поделиться352010-03-18 16:31:12

Автор: Demonera
Stuck between two worlds
Откуда: Дамаск
Зарегистрирован: 2009-10-02
Приглашений: 0
Сообщений: 672
Уважение: +15
Позитив: +5
Пол: Женский
Возраст: 30 [1994-08-02]
Провел на форуме:
16 дней 5 часов
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Очередной бред написанный мною, да ещё впридачу рифма хромает.

Almost hopeless

I’m tired of being lead,
Tired of being chained.
How much I have to wait to reach my independence?
Living in wonderful nature where birds can fly and sing I feel so soundless so wingless
But I know that I’m not alone, I just feel the loneliness,
I know that someday I will spread the wings of freedom and will fly so far away.
I’m tired of being deceived,
Tired of being insulted.
How much I have to wait to trust somebody and speak up my mind?
I see that every single person have so much close people that help to solve the problems but nobody do that to mine.
But I know that I’m not alone in this endless winter; there are so many people that are frozen just like me,
I know that someday there will be a human to open my heart and soul to and will really care for me.

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