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Who I am?

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Blue sky with sparkling sun,

But now it turned to gloom.

The clear water whispers to me:

"Now I've became your doom.

The wall of church that felt so safe,

Became to me so loom.

Until the moon starts rule the sky,

I sit in my dark room.

I don't know who I am,

I'm dead, but I'm alive.

The sun and water kill me,

But I can't be killed by a knife.

In one time I'm blessed and cursed,

Is it my sins express?

My spirit's solitude,

That's what I must reverse.

The blood to me is so sweet

As it's my life's sense.

In darkness the monster rice,

But sunrise its evanescence.

I don't know who I am,

I'm dead, but I'm alive.

I must save myself.

The monster'll has a strife.

I don't know who I am,

I'm angel or a demon?

But one thing I can tell,

I am still not a human.
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Извините я ещё не пробовала писать на русском. Пожалуйста, оцените.

Отредактировано Demonera (2009-10-15 18:16:30)

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Sorry, but I'm can not)))

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oh, it's so interesting ti me to read such a beautiful poem... The rhyme may be a little poor, but I think, that this poem is not bad.

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I think, I no think)))

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Thank you, Lady Goth.

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